I received few
comments from my peers on the first draft of my essay. My peers told me I had
too many questions in it but also how those questions made them think into the
matter. How there can be a good and a bad side of a situation. So I will try to
cut down on my questions and look for another way to write the information
down. My biggest concern about my essay is what if I go on with information
that is not related to this matter itself. I need help in cutting down
information and not go on and write about issues.
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